The first one is fluffy beyond belief, maybe? I like fluff occasionally.
Nah, that's not it. I rarely read stuff unless it's got fluffy bits nowadays. Most of my book purchases are authors like LKH, Kim Harrison, Kelley Armstrong and all the new and interesting Paranormal Romance books that are being released. Romance, Preternatural creatures, fluffiness and/or sex are a requirement to my reading lately. Harry Potter used to be an exception, but I've almost stopped reading all the fanfics I have on notice and have discovered ff.net's removal system sucks..
So it wasn't the fluff. You know how sometimes you read something and the scene just seems a little off or wrong for the characters?? That's the basic vibe I got from that drabble. Well written, but seems wrong for the characters. I can't pinpoint it closer than that..
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Nah, that's not it. I rarely read stuff unless it's got fluffy bits nowadays. Most of my book purchases are authors like LKH, Kim Harrison, Kelley Armstrong and all the new and interesting Paranormal Romance books that are being released. Romance, Preternatural creatures, fluffiness and/or sex are a requirement to my reading lately. Harry Potter used to be an exception, but I've almost stopped reading all the fanfics I have on notice and have discovered ff.net's removal system sucks..
So it wasn't the fluff. You know how sometimes you read something and the scene just seems a little off or wrong for the characters?? That's the basic vibe I got from that drabble. Well written, but seems wrong for the characters. I can't pinpoint it closer than that..