Date: 2006-06-08 09:22 pm (UTC)
Very nice. All of the characters have gone through some sort of ethical transformation since the start of the expedition, but none more so that Elizabeth. I really wish that the writers had taken the time to explore the emotional fallout from that episode.

Just a few nitpicks - the canon spelling for the long haired jerk is Kavanagh not Cavanaugh, and you slipped up in para 8 and used Elisabeth not Elizabeth. Neither of which detracted from my enjoyment of the ficlet but I thought I should point them out.
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