Three dollars and some change

It probably won't get better later on, because she's one of those authors who is now Big Enough to be able to get the dubious privilege of escaping the editor's touch. Some authors don't need editors. She's not one of them. She had some good ideas, especially starting out, but now it's just devolved into barely-readable mush.

I'll stick to your AB fanfics, anyway. You have far more self-discipline than she does, and take constructive criticism much better.